Jim Murphy talks about a transformative experience with his English teacher, Mr. Correale, at LaSalle College. He pushed him to improve his writing skills by holding high standards. After receiving a surprising 5/10 on his first assignment, he rose to the challenge with a descriptive piece inspired by a cold, foggy Eagles vs. Giants football game at Franklin Field. His vivid description, including the snow, the fog, and the game's dramatic moments, earned him a much-improved 9 or 9.5 out of 10. This experience left a lasting impact on his writing and his appreciation for Mr. Correale's dedication to teaching.